I like the concept as it’s unique but yes I agree with buttwheat that the cubes are way off. You don’t even have to stare at them for a long time to know that the proportions are off, that’s the first thing I noticed.

I agree with a lot of people who have posted. I’m no expert by all means but I’m not sold on the torn effect either. Some of the linework is a little shaky but I like the concept.

Looking good!

In my humble opinion, a back piece like that shouldn’t be your first tattoo (I’m not sure if it will be) but since you planned on getting the st. michael tattoo, maybe you can do that first. Take more time and think about the back piece, if you still feel the same way, then get er done

If those guys said the shop is legit, it will be. Most shops will give you a lot more time when you walk in there. I know it’s a bit of a drive for you but in the long run, it will be worth it. I am flying from Dallas to Cali to get mine done. I know finances can limit you but you can save up. It’s something that will on you the rest of your life so take the time and do it right.