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#117868
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Hey again, thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it all. When I go in next I am defaintly going to have him tie it all together to make it look like one piece. It does look like 3 sperate pieces, but it is also far from complete. I am guessing like I said before about 2-3 more sessions. And for the style of water and clouds this was what I went in with for what I wanted.

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#117516
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Funk;102712 wrote:
I believe he’s saying that a lot of the lines look fucking brutal and uneven. After looking back, I’m kinda inclined to agree with him. I guess it’s not extremely obvious unless it’s really close up.

And like buttwheat said, that orange could be toned down a bit. Maybe with some blue, purple, or greys.

yea, its defiantly not perfect, but hopefully there is a enough stuff going on in the tattoo to not just focus on the ships lines so I am not to worried about it to much. And I can’t hold it against my artist, it was a mess with all those lines and ink.

This was the outline
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#117511
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mrchen;102698 wrote:
you guys looking at the same line work and details I am in the second pic?
if so, I’ll leave this one alone……or simply say, it needs work

Sorry, I am a little confused by this. I would like to get feedback and hear your thoughts on it so that I could possibly help me improve anything that needs improving.

Thanks for the reply.

#117447
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Thanks for all the positive replies everyone, really digging them.

Adler;102632 wrote:
I’m going to take a different opinion in some ways. I like the ship (although I hope all those tiny lines hold up) and I really like the shading and detail with the waves. On the other hand I think the clouds could have been done better, especially comparing to the work on the waves. Also, I don’t really like the entire orange background, it’s too much for me. I think I would have liked to see some other tones within the sky to add some contrast and break up the solid orange.
Not sure what you can add to it except maybe some birds (but might blend with the clouds) or a sea creature in the water or exploding cannons or something…

See, this is kind of how I feel. That’s why I mad this thread. I was wondering if you guys have any idea to have the sunset, but kind of tone the orange down so its not to overwhelming.

#117423
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most defiantly!

#117416
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Wardy;102600 wrote:
Color..

Not being funny but i don’t like it as it is, It look’s unfinished.

Add some color and it will be awesome.

Thanks for the fast feedback I really appreciate it. Iit is defiantly unfinished. Just have my tattoo artist spend more detail on the sunset? Or are you just talking about getting color onto the ship? This is the third session, I have probably 2-3 more, 1 for the ship, another for touchup and just saying a 3rd for what if..

CHEERS!

#78673
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ebiegirl;57284 wrote:
I am NO good at visualizing things, but I bet that if you got a large enough piece, you could work in the two elements… a koi pond near a building/in a garden, etc. Sounds like a fun big plan!

yea, I am thinking either the entire side of my body (but i’ve heard that part is really sensitive. I am pretty tough, but I don’t know if I am ready for something that big for a first haha) Or like I said in my OP, a half sleeve, or the half sleeve that extends to my upper chest. Not to sure yet, like I said still brainstorming ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thanks!

edit: I just checked out your tattoo and that is about the area I want and size haha. Was it crazy painful? BTW it looks really nice to!

#78670
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Thanks!

BIKERinBLACK77;57280 wrote:
Make sure you don’t rush into it, because tattoos are foreverrrr.

Thats why I’m here ๐Ÿ˜‰

miss_ivy;57281 wrote:
Welcome to the forum! Do you know what kind of style tattoo your wanting to have?x

Yea I made a thread here. http://www.thetattooforum.com/need-some-extra-brainstorming-tattoo-need-t14258.html I want a colorful Japanese style tattoo.

#78666
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Thanks a lot for the ideas. It wouldn’t look weird having different elements that dont fit with the ocean/water? Thats my big thing. I love the landscape of japan and all the plants and trees they have there. And like I said I like the way their buildings look, but it seems like those elements wouldn’t fit with the koi and water.

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