#38143
Clandest
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    @clandest

So below is a timeline of my tattoo to its current state. And, was just wanting some feedback on how to make the overall piece fit together better. Right now the sunset is taking a lot of attention away from the piece and I want a balance so it flows better. Granted, its not done yet. the ships is going to get a overhaul on detail and everything once we work on the ship next sessions. Was just looking for constructive criticism to help improve the tattoo..

Thank you, and here is the timeline. Looking forward hearing back.

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#117415
Wardy
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    @wardy

Color..

Not being funny but i don’t like it as it is, It look’s unfinished.

Add some color and it will be awesome.


Are you going to bark all day little doggy or are you going to bite?
#117416
Clandest
Participant
    @clandest
Wardy;102600 wrote:
Color..

Not being funny but i don’t like it as it is, It look’s unfinished.

Add some color and it will be awesome.

Thanks for the fast feedback I really appreciate it. Iit is defiantly unfinished. Just have my tattoo artist spend more detail on the sunset? Or are you just talking about getting color onto the ship? This is the third session, I have probably 2-3 more, 1 for the ship, another for touchup and just saying a 3rd for what if..

CHEERS!

#117418
Wardy
Participant
    @wardy

OH! haha! i thought this was the finished product! Hey if your getting the ship color’d dude i can not wait to see this tattoo finished! be sure to keep us updated with pictures.


Are you going to bark all day little doggy or are you going to bite?
#117423
Clandest
Participant
    @clandest

most defiantly!

#117435
buttwheat
Participant
    @buttwheat

I like it.

#117438