I have some tattoo’s from the 80s and compared to what you can get now from a tattoo artist is unreal, I think people should start going to a tattoo artist rather than a tattooist, look at Dave Corden and Bez from Triplesix even Rob Doubtfire Bez and Dave corden are outstanding when it come’s to drawing I know not everyone can afford to pay between £300 – £600 maybe It’s best to save for that tattoo rather than regret afterwards. Regarding your tattoo all I can think of is add color I hope you can find someone who will work on it.
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The quality is a lot better than the tat you showed earlier he doe’s seem to tattoo anything though and thats what puts me off some tattooists, why would you want Keith Lemon on your arm or Woody me personally would travel even if it was abroad to get a top artist, did someone say earlier you had Dave Corden round the corner how about Triplesix.

I personally love Day of the dead It’s totally my thing if I was you I would do a little more research, myself would choose one or the other It doesn’t seem to look right to me joining the two try looking at a guy called Dave Sanchez a tattoo artist from LA he might give you some fresh idea’s on detail also think about adding some Marigolds as well, I admire you for doing your design I couldn’t I dont have any imagination.
Good look with your design would like to see the finished drawing