#37159
NickPrender
Participant
@nickprender

check it out let me know your thoughts. I used the reference of a famous model as a side profile.

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#108393
Adler
Participant
@adler

I’d like to see the reference. Maybe that would change my opinion but I don’t really like it. I love gypsies and lady head tattoos and from what I’ve seen and read they can be very difficult to execute well. I’ve looked at a ton of gypsy tattoos and they do seem very hit or miss. I’m not an artist so I can’t give a good critique but I just don’t like this too much at all. The linework in the hair and head wrap looks pretty bad, the flower is unproportionately big and poorly shaded, the face seems flat and I don’t care for the colors in the face either. Other than that it’s great. Sorry man, just my honest opinion. But I’ve seen some good artists do gypsies poorly so they really must be hard to do.

#108395
NickPrender
Participant
@nickprender

Haha other than everything it’s great? Thanks for the opinion. I agree the line work looks a bit off on the head band. Really its from uploading the photo onto the computer. In terms of volume most traditional gypsy faces tend to be rather flat? High volume versions are cool and all but my client wants an old school look with my personal touch.

#108421
Wardy
Participant
@wardy

Good work Nick

#108423
NickPrender
Participant
@nickprender

Thanks man. Much appreciated

#108426
Adler
Participant
@adler

I really didn’t mean to sound too harsh. For where you’re at you’re doing nice work, this just isn’t one of my favorites. And you’re right, the old school traditional gypsy faces are rather flat. I generally prefer the slightly neo-traditional style so maybe that’s effecting my opinion.

#108427
NickPrender
Participant
@nickprender

No worries man no tears from these eyes. We all have different critiques i personally was really pumped for where I’m at my. My mentor was beyond happy. Gimme a break I’ve been apprenticing 3 months haha. But really man you aren’t half as harsh as my mentor

#108429
Parademic
Participant
@parademic

I think besides the flower and some of the linework it looks decent!

#108436
ArniVidar
Moderator
@arnividar
NickPrender;92319 wrote:
My mentor was beyond happy. Gimme a break I’ve been apprenticing 3 months haha.

I thought you didn’t have an apprenticeship yet?

#108437
NickPrender
Participant
@nickprender

What made you think that mang? All my posts have(for the most part) said apprenticeship tattoos

#108438
ArniVidar
Moderator
@arnividar

Oh, just me being stupid. Mixing you up with Dave the Van. 🙂

#108443
Amok
Participant
@amok

Opinions vary of course, as long as the client is happy it’s all good!

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