Thanks for all the replies. Now that you guys mention it, it really does look like a back piece, lol. I feel like it should kind of wrap around a little more. If I wasn’t so set on a half sleeve, I would honestly just go with it. I also feel like it should be more elongated as my arms are pretty skinny.

My intentions aren’t to have this guy draw it up, take it to a tattoo artist, and say “put this on me”. Definitely would like the tattoo artist to redesign as necessary. I’m more or less having it designed ahead of time for my peace of mind. Just want to get a basic idea of what I want to get before I take the plunge. I’m not really rushing into getting it (would be first tattoo), just trying to take my time and get as much advice/input along the way. Even if the design is totally redone, I’ll at least be able to determine if I like the theme and would be comfortable wearing it for the rest of my life. Not taking the decision lightly. Might be a total waste of time to have it drawn up before hand by someone other than the artist, but at least I’ll have something visual to hand the artist.

I originally was thinking about a run of the mill all seeing eye, but then I did LSD a few times, lol. In my experience, pretty much all lights look like the eye of god on acid, but they are more colorful and remind me of the eye on the Tool album Lateralus (Alex Grey has some awesome art). So, I was trying to go for a more psychadelic eye. I’ll see what he comes up with in the final design, I feel like if it is refined a bit it will look good. I definitely see where you guys are coming from though. I’ll be sure to post the final design when it is finished.