overall it looks good. the only thing i saw was the size ratio of the body to the wings. was it planed that way. i”m not a pro or an artist and i give props to those who can do what i can’t but that’s what i saw.

Hi

I like it – it is a nice piece.

If I was to add some (constructive criticism) I would have enlarged the wings ever so slightly, and raised them further up and and above the shoulder (but hey if the customer wanted it exactly that way no biggie).

My only other bits are just really small detail stuff and is just my opinion and not meant as any disrepsect.

I would have just boldened the pupil a fraction to make it stand out more.

A little bit more drop shading from the blue to the yellow.

I would also have added just a slightly more bit of shading along the wings and behind them (personal taste there i just like shading a lot).

It is a great piece and he will make a storming artist.

Take Care
Matthew