Okay so im looking to get a chest piece that has an eagle or just the wings and has my last name in script on it too. This is what i threw together but it doesn’t flow very well. Any feedback would be great

Here’s a couple other images that i have that i like. This is not a final design by any means and im not stealing the designs, i will make it unique, just trying to get an idea before i go to a artist to have it drawn up.

Thanks in advance for any feedback or help