It's very light and hard to see, but from what I can tell it looks a little bit unfinished.
And something about her legs looks a little bit funky,

But other than that great, way better than I could have ever attempted.

thanks. yea its unfinished. maybe the legs look funny because its a drawing of a black model and her legs are thick.

I don't know how I knew she was black. Very beautiful IMO. I would think a tattoo artist could really make something nice with that.

nice lines for a rough sketch buddy, be nice to see it finished

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Looks decent, but whats with the lips? Looks like Homer Simpsons mouth!

Agreed. Not bad but lighten up on the lips and make them sexy. I think a simple fix is generally to draw the TOP portion of the lip , then add the bottom in a simple small "smile" to connect to the top. DOn't overthink drawing women, simple clean lines = sexier in most cases. Same with babies. Less lines equal cuter, my college teacher called it the dirty baby/lad¥y syndrome, never overshadow or overdraw those two subjects.

post up another pic when your done drawing her